Stupid Jack!!! Hes good for nothing, same as is group of hunters. The one time i really needed them to be caring for the fire, they couldn't do it. Seems as if to jack, getting meat is more important than getting rescued. Today when i looked up the mountain, all i saw was an opalescences mirage rather than a fire, what should have been there. Jack really is dumb. Hes incredulous to my choices even though i they have shown to be right. Also hes malevolent to piggy. He never does anything to jack but he still has the nerve to go up to him and hitting him. Poor piggy just let out a shrill yell and fell whimpering.
Its preposterous how his whole group is just as useless as he is except for Simon and a few others but they haven't shown anything good yet. Especially with their implication of respect towards Jack meaning we cant do anything to him. Incredulously they seem to like him. He makes me want to sent my self gyrating around the would. They're just unneeded and they come up with irrelevant uses. Whats been done has been done all i can do is deal with them but i fear it might drive me nuts.
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Stupid Jack!!! Hes good for nothing, same as is group of hunters.
I like how you show ralph's anger for jack and how he feel's he really isnt doing much because he loves hunting and hasnt caught a pig so far so he's wasting time when he couldve been helping simon and ralph like the littlun's keep up the good work luis.
Luis,
Your journal clearly reflects the resentment that Ralph feels for Jack. It's a little on the short side. Please make your journals 450-500 words.
REVISION:
Examine the following sentences. Fix the punctuation and grammatical errors.
1) Hes good for nothing, same as is group of hunters.
2) Today when i looked up the mountain, all i saw was an opalescences mirage rather than a fire, what should have been there.
3) Hes incredulous to my choices even though i they have shown to be right.
4) Its preposterous how his whole group is just as useless as he is except for Simon and a few others but they haven't shown anything good yet.
5) He makes me want to sent my self gyrating around the would.
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