We are starting to worry. Every things crazy now. No more control, logic, rules or anything. Jack is cheif now and hes going mad. Everyone on the island is under the influence of his wrongly ruling.
First the theft. They came and just attacked us, even though we were just four biguns and a bunch of liluns. We didn't know, we couldn't do anything. Near the end i kicked Sam kicked someone where it hurts, but Eric was just scared. They stole Piggy's glasses though. They know he cant see. Poor piggy, what if he never gets them back. He'd be blind for ever. That was just mean.
They took our fire too. No one cares about the fire but us. Although it was hard work, its not like jack would have a fire. We are the only chance for us to get saved but, jack blew it. He took our ignition source but were only four, there’s no possible way for us to have kept it going.
Later on we all decided to go to castle rock to talk to jack. Show him how we should be acting, that were good ol British boys, not animals. We thought it was a good idea. We were wrong. Jack wasn't very amused and ended up getting mad. We just wanted Piggy's glasses back. We would have shared fire. We didn’t mean no harm, but i guess they did. Jack wanted to fight with Ralph. Everyone went against their original leader. They all betrayed him.
Things got real crazy after. Everyone got all wild, then they grabbed us and took us away. The worst part was, we saw our own friend Piggy die. His death showed us all how savage jack truly was. Hes a monster. How are we supposed to follow him. Were worried, he beats people and forces them to do things, then he has killed two people already. Were forced to be with him, poor Ralph we feel like were going against Ralph too, but we have no choice. We cant let this go on. Its just too much.
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Iliked how you talked like sam n eric would actually talk. I can tell put thought into how they would think, but some parts didn't make sense t all. For example, "i kicked Sam kicked someone where it hurts." And again make sure you chack your grammar a little more.
i agree with dimitri about the sam n eric thing but you did good
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