Tuesday, March 4, 2008

Blog Prompt 7 - I hate ralph

I don’t like Ralph at all. Hes good for nothing. Jack would make a way better leader. He doesn’t realize what we need. What we want. I just hate him. I cant stand being near him. I had to spend the whole day with him, luckily I didn’t go mad.
We first went pig hunting. No big deal. Ralph came along since he’s a woos and he wanted to show off how much better he is. When we saw a pig he threw his spear and hit it. He freaked out and started jumping like it as a big deal. What ever, its just luck. We do that every day. He tried to act like he was one of us. I could tell he enjoyed it. A part of me tells me he is in some way like us, but I still despise him. After that we were just playing with Robert. This showed me how he can also be like us. He joined in on the fun. For a second he was welcomed into our little community of hunter.
We then randomly realized we had checked for the beast everywhere, but the mountain. We all started towards it until everyone chickened out. Near the end it was just me, Ralph and Jack. As we hike up the mountain I began to become more and more annoyed with him. I don’t know what it is just looking at him makes me just hate him. Jack went to show how strong he is and brave by himself to look at the beast. We found it. Too bad I had to wait with Ralph sitting there. It was disgusting just having him in my presence.
I just sat there thinking of what I want to do to him. I hat that Ralph and I will never like him.

2 comments:

Dimitri's Lord Of The Flies Blog said...

Not enough detail, its really short and again a lot of things are spelled wrong I like the title though because it fits the mood of the entry really well.

Lexus' Blog said...

some stuff was spelled wong and the title it dose fit the mood but i think you should have done a better one