Jack and his stupid hunters. They are just a bunch of rude, savage jerks. Until now they haven't helped at all, all they've really done was give us a couple pieces of meat. Ralph knows as well. We all know it was us. We were all overcome by the adrenaline and madness from the dance and chant. We are the ones to blame. No matter how much we try to run from it we know we did it. And were here stressing about it while stupid jack and his hunters are off making a joke about it. Supposedly it was the beast, and to think... i myself for a second believed in the beast as well. We were all caught up in the chant and randomly a figure appears out of the darkness of the forest. Jack told us to attack him, he called him the beast. About half way we realized what we had done. Even then, Jack, even though he knew it was Simon, he continued to call him the Beast. The kids continued to attack. Jack is just trying to play all this off as if it was a game. Jack knows he killed Simon. He was the reason for his dead. His stupidity and ignorance has caused a death. I'm worried they might actually be taking all this seriously. At first it was all just a joke, but they're starting to actually praise this thing.Its been harder and harder to survive now. Its all thanks to jack and his hunters.
Jack and his Savages are sadists. They know i cant see and they still go and steal my glasses how am i gonna be able to see. How can i do anything now. I wont be able to survive much longer without them. How am i supposed to eat, or go to the rest room, or just walk straight without tripping on a rock. For the rest of my life i may not be able to see.
How dare they do that, i cant believe how they could come in beat us up and steal my glasses. That's just mean. Something is someday gonna go and get him back.I just can believe those jerks. The island would do better off without them their not even human, all i know is they're not needed.
Wednesday, March 12, 2008
Blog Prompt 13 - Revision of 10 Were Scared..
We are starting to worry. Everything is just a big mess now. No more control, logic, rules or anything. Jack is chief now and hes going mad. Everyone on the island is under the influence of his erroneous ruling.
It first started with the theft. They came and just attacked us, even though we were just four biguns and a bunch of lilluns. We didn't know what to do. They hit us when we least expected. Near the end Eric kicked someone where it hurts, but Sam was just incredibly scared. They stole Piggy's glasses though. They know he cant see. Poor piggy, what if he never gets them back. He'd be blind for ever. That was just mean.
They took our fire too. No one cares about the fire but us. Although it was hard work, its not like jack would have a fire. We were the only chance for the kids on the island to get saved but, jack blew it. He took our ignition source. Jack would never even think of keeping it going. He even said he didn't care anything about the fire. We could have all worked together and kept it going. It would have worked, but know we have nothing to start it. Either way, even if we had the glasses, there’s no possible way for us to have kept it going.
Later on we all decided to go to castle rock to talk to jack. Show him how we should be acting, that were good ol British boys, not animals. We thought it was a good idea. We were wrong. Jack wasn't very amused and ended up getting mad. We just wanted Piggy's glasses back. We would have shared fire. We didn’t mean no harm, but i guess they did. Jack wanted to fight with Ralph. Everyone went against their original leader. They all betrayed him.
Things got real crazy after. Everyone got all wild, then they grabbed us and took us away. The worst part was, we saw our own friend Piggy die. His death showed us all how savage jack truly was. Hes a monster. How are we supposed to follow him. Were worried, he beats people and forces them to do things, then he has killed two people already. Were forced to be with him, poor Ralph we feel like were going against him as well, but we have no choice. We cant let this go on. Its just too much.
It first started with the theft. They came and just attacked us, even though we were just four biguns and a bunch of lilluns. We didn't know what to do. They hit us when we least expected. Near the end Eric kicked someone where it hurts, but Sam was just incredibly scared. They stole Piggy's glasses though. They know he cant see. Poor piggy, what if he never gets them back. He'd be blind for ever. That was just mean.
They took our fire too. No one cares about the fire but us. Although it was hard work, its not like jack would have a fire. We were the only chance for the kids on the island to get saved but, jack blew it. He took our ignition source. Jack would never even think of keeping it going. He even said he didn't care anything about the fire. We could have all worked together and kept it going. It would have worked, but know we have nothing to start it. Either way, even if we had the glasses, there’s no possible way for us to have kept it going.
Later on we all decided to go to castle rock to talk to jack. Show him how we should be acting, that were good ol British boys, not animals. We thought it was a good idea. We were wrong. Jack wasn't very amused and ended up getting mad. We just wanted Piggy's glasses back. We would have shared fire. We didn’t mean no harm, but i guess they did. Jack wanted to fight with Ralph. Everyone went against their original leader. They all betrayed him.
Things got real crazy after. Everyone got all wild, then they grabbed us and took us away. The worst part was, we saw our own friend Piggy die. His death showed us all how savage jack truly was. Hes a monster. How are we supposed to follow him. Were worried, he beats people and forces them to do things, then he has killed two people already. Were forced to be with him, poor Ralph we feel like were going against him as well, but we have no choice. We cant let this go on. Its just too much.
Monday, March 10, 2008
Blog Prompt 12 - Witness Preperation
Character - Eric
Chapter one -
Sam n'Eric are seen at the meeting in the beginnings that Ralph calls. They are just regular kids, They don't really do anything special. They are noticed for being identical twins and are made fun of.
Chapter Two -
Eric was part of the group who helped start the first fire along with jack. The fire then went crazy and they couldn't control it.
Chapter 3 -
They didn't do much in this chapter. They just witnessed the argument between Jack and Ralph and Pig hunting and the Fire.
Chapter 4 -
Sam n' Eric Saw jack and his hunters when they painted their faces before going to hunt. The chapter where jack and his hunters forgot about the fire.
Chapter 5 -
In this chapter Sam n' Eric dont do much. They just see the big meeting where Ralph talks about what happened the day before with the missed ship and the beast.
Chapter 6 -
Sam n' Eric are supposed to be watching the fire when they fall asleep. When they wake up they see a dead parachutist from a navy plane sitting and they mistake the corpse for the beast. They then just run and tell everyone and they all think the beast is real.
Chapter 7 -
Ralph is hunting but Sam n' Eric are just back at camp. (where Ralph goes up the mountain to prove Sam n' Eric wring but he sees the body and also mistakes it for the beast.
Chapter 8 -
Sam n' Eric are seen at the meeting that jack called. (same chapter where Simon talks with LOTF and where jack leaves and creates his own tribe.
Chapter 9 -
We decided to both go to the party. They met Ralph and piggy there and they were really embarrassed but Ralph didn't seem to mind. Simon is mistaken for the beast and killed, Sam n' Eric where accomplices.
Chapter 10 -
Sam n' Eric are still with Ralph although most kids already left him. They talk with Ralph and piggy about the death all calling it just an accident. Later on jacks tribe go and try to steal piggy's glasses but they help fight them off.
Chapter 11 -
They decide to go to castle rock to try and talk some sense into Jack. They get captured and forced to join Jacks tribe. They were witnesses to piggy's Death.
Chapter 12 -
They give Ralph some of their meat. Then they were beaten by jack and Roger and made to tell where Ralph was hiding. They were also made to hunt with the tribe for Ralph. They got saved in the end.
Chapter one -
Sam n'Eric are seen at the meeting in the beginnings that Ralph calls. They are just regular kids, They don't really do anything special. They are noticed for being identical twins and are made fun of.
Chapter Two -
Eric was part of the group who helped start the first fire along with jack. The fire then went crazy and they couldn't control it.
Chapter 3 -
They didn't do much in this chapter. They just witnessed the argument between Jack and Ralph and Pig hunting and the Fire.
Chapter 4 -
Sam n' Eric Saw jack and his hunters when they painted their faces before going to hunt. The chapter where jack and his hunters forgot about the fire.
Chapter 5 -
In this chapter Sam n' Eric dont do much. They just see the big meeting where Ralph talks about what happened the day before with the missed ship and the beast.
Chapter 6 -
Sam n' Eric are supposed to be watching the fire when they fall asleep. When they wake up they see a dead parachutist from a navy plane sitting and they mistake the corpse for the beast. They then just run and tell everyone and they all think the beast is real.
Chapter 7 -
Ralph is hunting but Sam n' Eric are just back at camp. (where Ralph goes up the mountain to prove Sam n' Eric wring but he sees the body and also mistakes it for the beast.
Chapter 8 -
Sam n' Eric are seen at the meeting that jack called. (same chapter where Simon talks with LOTF and where jack leaves and creates his own tribe.
Chapter 9 -
We decided to both go to the party. They met Ralph and piggy there and they were really embarrassed but Ralph didn't seem to mind. Simon is mistaken for the beast and killed, Sam n' Eric where accomplices.
Chapter 10 -
Sam n' Eric are still with Ralph although most kids already left him. They talk with Ralph and piggy about the death all calling it just an accident. Later on jacks tribe go and try to steal piggy's glasses but they help fight them off.
Chapter 11 -
They decide to go to castle rock to try and talk some sense into Jack. They get captured and forced to join Jacks tribe. They were witnesses to piggy's Death.
Chapter 12 -
They give Ralph some of their meat. Then they were beaten by jack and Roger and made to tell where Ralph was hiding. They were also made to hunt with the tribe for Ralph. They got saved in the end.
Tuesday, March 4, 2008
Blog Prompt 7 - I hate ralph
I don’t like Ralph at all. Hes good for nothing. Jack would make a way better leader. He doesn’t realize what we need. What we want. I just hate him. I cant stand being near him. I had to spend the whole day with him, luckily I didn’t go mad.
We first went pig hunting. No big deal. Ralph came along since he’s a woos and he wanted to show off how much better he is. When we saw a pig he threw his spear and hit it. He freaked out and started jumping like it as a big deal. What ever, its just luck. We do that every day. He tried to act like he was one of us. I could tell he enjoyed it. A part of me tells me he is in some way like us, but I still despise him. After that we were just playing with Robert. This showed me how he can also be like us. He joined in on the fun. For a second he was welcomed into our little community of hunter.
We then randomly realized we had checked for the beast everywhere, but the mountain. We all started towards it until everyone chickened out. Near the end it was just me, Ralph and Jack. As we hike up the mountain I began to become more and more annoyed with him. I don’t know what it is just looking at him makes me just hate him. Jack went to show how strong he is and brave by himself to look at the beast. We found it. Too bad I had to wait with Ralph sitting there. It was disgusting just having him in my presence.
I just sat there thinking of what I want to do to him. I hat that Ralph and I will never like him.
We first went pig hunting. No big deal. Ralph came along since he’s a woos and he wanted to show off how much better he is. When we saw a pig he threw his spear and hit it. He freaked out and started jumping like it as a big deal. What ever, its just luck. We do that every day. He tried to act like he was one of us. I could tell he enjoyed it. A part of me tells me he is in some way like us, but I still despise him. After that we were just playing with Robert. This showed me how he can also be like us. He joined in on the fun. For a second he was welcomed into our little community of hunter.
We then randomly realized we had checked for the beast everywhere, but the mountain. We all started towards it until everyone chickened out. Near the end it was just me, Ralph and Jack. As we hike up the mountain I began to become more and more annoyed with him. I don’t know what it is just looking at him makes me just hate him. Jack went to show how strong he is and brave by himself to look at the beast. We found it. Too bad I had to wait with Ralph sitting there. It was disgusting just having him in my presence.
I just sat there thinking of what I want to do to him. I hat that Ralph and I will never like him.
Blog Promt 10 - Were worried
We are starting to worry. Every things crazy now. No more control, logic, rules or anything. Jack is cheif now and hes going mad. Everyone on the island is under the influence of his wrongly ruling.
First the theft. They came and just attacked us, even though we were just four biguns and a bunch of liluns. We didn't know, we couldn't do anything. Near the end i kicked Sam kicked someone where it hurts, but Eric was just scared. They stole Piggy's glasses though. They know he cant see. Poor piggy, what if he never gets them back. He'd be blind for ever. That was just mean.
They took our fire too. No one cares about the fire but us. Although it was hard work, its not like jack would have a fire. We are the only chance for us to get saved but, jack blew it. He took our ignition source but were only four, there’s no possible way for us to have kept it going.
Later on we all decided to go to castle rock to talk to jack. Show him how we should be acting, that were good ol British boys, not animals. We thought it was a good idea. We were wrong. Jack wasn't very amused and ended up getting mad. We just wanted Piggy's glasses back. We would have shared fire. We didn’t mean no harm, but i guess they did. Jack wanted to fight with Ralph. Everyone went against their original leader. They all betrayed him.
Things got real crazy after. Everyone got all wild, then they grabbed us and took us away. The worst part was, we saw our own friend Piggy die. His death showed us all how savage jack truly was. Hes a monster. How are we supposed to follow him. Were worried, he beats people and forces them to do things, then he has killed two people already. Were forced to be with him, poor Ralph we feel like were going against Ralph too, but we have no choice. We cant let this go on. Its just too much.
First the theft. They came and just attacked us, even though we were just four biguns and a bunch of liluns. We didn't know, we couldn't do anything. Near the end i kicked Sam kicked someone where it hurts, but Eric was just scared. They stole Piggy's glasses though. They know he cant see. Poor piggy, what if he never gets them back. He'd be blind for ever. That was just mean.
They took our fire too. No one cares about the fire but us. Although it was hard work, its not like jack would have a fire. We are the only chance for us to get saved but, jack blew it. He took our ignition source but were only four, there’s no possible way for us to have kept it going.
Later on we all decided to go to castle rock to talk to jack. Show him how we should be acting, that were good ol British boys, not animals. We thought it was a good idea. We were wrong. Jack wasn't very amused and ended up getting mad. We just wanted Piggy's glasses back. We would have shared fire. We didn’t mean no harm, but i guess they did. Jack wanted to fight with Ralph. Everyone went against their original leader. They all betrayed him.
Things got real crazy after. Everyone got all wild, then they grabbed us and took us away. The worst part was, we saw our own friend Piggy die. His death showed us all how savage jack truly was. Hes a monster. How are we supposed to follow him. Were worried, he beats people and forces them to do things, then he has killed two people already. Were forced to be with him, poor Ralph we feel like were going against Ralph too, but we have no choice. We cant let this go on. Its just too much.
Monday, March 3, 2008
Blog Prompt 11 - Silly Children
Look at them. I think just a couple ol British children. Would behave a lot better than this. Now, they cause two deaths, burnt the place down and were trying to kill another boy. I couldn't even believe it. In my opinion they didn't do a very well job staying alive and working hard to stay civilized. I would visualize a nice happy place, but they couldn't just stay happy and good, they had to go and kill each other.
I arrived and it was just an entire mess. I heard some weird Indian ululation. Boys all over the place just dirty with cuts and scratches. They had paint all over them selves like savages or something. They were just filthy, no order at all. They didn't have any real leader ship except for that boy Ralph who well… was a mess. I got there just in time be fore those crazy kids killed him. And him too, the leader, whom everyone for some reason wanted to kill, he was all dirty and cuts and dried blood all over him and besides he couldn't stand up for himself, he ran to my side and cowered besides me. His hair looked like it hadn't been cut in months, which I guess is okay since they're on an island. He was just horrible.
Next off all the children were messes too, how I said. Especially that boy jack. Now They're a bunch off boys, not even over 15 but they were already having wars and killing each other. That's just not right, and two DEATHS!! Come on. They never really elaborated on what really happened but I'm just guessing that boy Ralph did a lousy job as a leader and prolly drove everyone crazy. And maybe they just killed for fun? Or something… Maybe sacrifice in order to get off. I'm guessing the boy was a dictator like person if they all wanted to kill him. Oh yeah I got it, he was a bad dictator that drove them nuts and made them do sacrifices and in the end they just realized he was bad. Or... Never mind.
They were just a bunch of silly children.
Tuesday, February 26, 2008
Blog Prompt 9 - Just too much
Jack and his stupid hunters. Those jerks. Ralph knows. We all know it was us. We were all overcome by it. No matter how much we try to run from it we know we did it. And were here stressing about it while stupid jack and his hunters are off making a joke about it. Purposively it was the beast, and to think... i myself for a second believed in the beast as well. Jack is just trying to play all this off as if it was a game. Jack know he killed Simon. He was the reason hes dead. His stupidity has caused a death. I'm worried they might actually be taking all this seriously. At first it was all just a joke, but they're starting to actually praise this thing.Its been harder and harder to survive now. Its all thanks to jack and his hunters.
They know i cant see and they still go and steal my glasses how am i gonna be able to see. How can i do anything now. I wont be able to survive much longer without them. How am i supposed to eat, or go to the rest room, or just walk straight without tripping on a rock. For the rest of my life i may not be able to see.
How dare they do that, i cant believe how they could come in beat us up and steal my glasses. Thats just mean. Something is someday gonna go and get him back.I just can believe those jerks. The island would do better off without them their not even human, all i know is they're not needed.
They know i cant see and they still go and steal my glasses how am i gonna be able to see. How can i do anything now. I wont be able to survive much longer without them. How am i supposed to eat, or go to the rest room, or just walk straight without tripping on a rock. For the rest of my life i may not be able to see.
How dare they do that, i cant believe how they could come in beat us up and steal my glasses. Thats just mean. Something is someday gonna go and get him back.I just can believe those jerks. The island would do better off without them their not even human, all i know is they're not needed.
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